shieldmaiden

Wow ... my heart is pounding. You did such a fantastic job of pulling me into your story. I could picture those terrible injuries. The ending was perfect and had ...

Hey there. Wow, how I could not have seen this before? It's awesome and I really like everything about it. To be honest, I'm a terrible shipper. With anything (movies, ...

Hey Phoenix! Love this poem as much as I love dragons. And I really love dragons. They make terrific villains, wonderful heroes/heroines, or just part of a world. I think ...

Wow .... I can't even. That last paragraph took my breath away. After everything Katie had been through one would think that I'd be less shocked at finding her friends ...

Hey Honora! Great second chapter - or part of the first. I really liked how you had us in Katie's head while all of this absurdity was happening to her. ...

Love it! I really like your character's relationship with Jennifer. However, how did she end up dating Austin behind Katie's back? And how does James know that she likes him? ...

So beautiful. An amazing pleasure to read. The imagery, the description, the use of the senses including emotions - all so touching. Just one question - is this a poem ...

Very nice and very true. Liked the imagery (not that I like picturing poop everywhere :) ) but I felt sad for the poor man who had to do such ...

Really great imagery. I could picture these poor souls' pain and suffering. I particularly liked the verse where you mentioned the sign post with 'ghost's forgetting'. Spooky! Only thing I ...

Nice piece of poetry. I really like how this seems to apply to more than just the current situation. There are many others out there where some people are as ...

Wow - just wow! I really admire this piece of work. It flowed to nicely and held me spellbound with its rhythm and rhyme. Its darkness at the beginning and ...

Love this! So many favorite things about it: 1) I love how you introduced this story. Richard's reaction to the dragon (not normal as there was no screaming) was very ...

Hey Honora. Love this work! I know that this is my second time reading this from your first draft before YWS. But for some strange reason this second time was ...

Hey. I really liked this. The parts where it was taken from Meral's viewpoint I often was left a bit confused. The dialogue was a bit rusty - switching between ...

Cute! I love how you referenced your characters simply as THE SISTER and THE BROTHER. I got thrown off the curb when you referenced the BROTHER once as Gabe. For ...