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Re: His Name Was Turd
Hey yo! Shey here to review this thing, cause admittedly it's been in the green room too long. As far as grammar and rhythm goes, this poem was pretty perfect. ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: A tanka for one poem (14/1/2017)
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Admittedly, I had to google what a tanka was. The definition I got was a five line poem, with the first and third ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: desolate.
Sheyren here to review. Wow. Just wow. That's my brain after reading this. This was flawless. Emotional. Intense. I loved it. I have absolutely nothing to commen on that is ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Magnetized
Hola! Shey here to review! For "word vomit," that was pretty awesome! I wish my word vomit was this good. But really, this was a fabulous poem. I haven't much ...
Jan 29, 2017 - Re: Poetry Collection 1.1 Jan 29, 2017
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Re: The Storm of Life
Hola! Me llamo Sheyren! ¿Como estas? Sorry, I got tired of the normal english introduction. Anyway, I'm Sheyren. But enough of me. Let's get to the poem you wrote! First ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Nigeria
Hey there! Sheyren here to review this poem! Now, I don't know a whole lot about the southern hemisphere (for some reason I can name every country in northern continents ...
Nov 13, 2016 -
Re: November 9th
Hey there! Sheyren here to review! This poem was soooo relatable. That night I went to bed not checking, not expecting the outcome to be different from what the polls ...
Nov 13, 2016 -
Re: Where does personality come from?
Hello, hockeybro0017! Welcome to YWS! This was an enjoyable poem, but the flow was a bit hard to follow. As Moonwatcher said too, stanzas would make this poem a lot ...
Nov 6, 2016 -
Re: Elysium
Wow. Sheyren here for a review! I want to say it now that this poem was just so good. The language you used, the rhythm you used, it all made ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Golden Leaves and Icy Air
AUTUMN! Hi, its Sheyren. I'm going to review this poem. If you hadn't guessed, I like to read seasonal poems, mainly autumnal poems. So, of all the poems I saw ...
Oct 23, 2016 -
Re: Abandoned Pizzeria
Hi DeepRoses! I see you have a Five Nights at Freddy's fan-poem. Cool. I've never seen a poem rather than a fanfiction, so its unique. And awesome. Now, I've never ...
Oct 23, 2016 -
Re: Our Hearts are Leaves
Hey, Sheyren here for a review! This was a nice poem, and I enjoyed it a lot! Onto the review! First, can I just say that "autumnal" was an awesome ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: Red Rose
Sheyren here to review for a Shamin and to punch this piece outta the green room! So this was a great poem, and that's about all I really want to ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: The River
Hello! Sheyren here to review this poem! I enjoyed this, and I'm glad I clicked on it! Now for the review part: With poems, grammatical errors aren't a valid thing ...
Oct 13, 2016