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Re: fin.
Sheyren's Review ~~ Hey there! \(^。^ ) Shey here for a review! Overall, this was a neat poem. In whole, I haven't got a whole lot to comment on, since ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: perspective shift
Sheyren's Review ~~ Hey there! Shey here to review! Overall, this was a unique poem. Most poetry tells a story through first person, a person directly involved with the story, ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: weather reports bring warnings of monachopsis: locals advised to keep out of own skulls
Hey there! Shey here to review! Overall this was a nicely written poem. I've just got a few comments for it. First, I want to ask why the "I"s is ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: photosynthesis
Hey there! Sheyren here to review - and, oh, the words move! Neat! Anyway, you have a nice poem here, to I'm just gonna jump right into this thing! (woah ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Indigo Night
Hey there! Shey here to review! This was a nice poem, but I've got a couple of things to suggest you do next time. Firstly, you have this posted under ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Six word story
Hey there! Shey here to review! Where do I start? Obviously there aren't grammar errors to correct, or formatting to complain about. Its six words. I guess I'll just talk ...
Mar 25, 2017 -
Re: in the dawn of spring
Hey there! Shey here for a review! This was a nice poem, and I don't really have much to say, since there wasn't much to comment on. I would like ...
Mar 24, 2017 -
Re: The Pain of the Left Behind
Hey there! Shey here to kick this outta the green room with a quick review. I haven't got much to say other than keep writing like this. This style... I ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: the path of treasured stones
Hey there! Shey here to review, and - oh my Lord, you have posted a LOT of poems. Wow. Well, I doubt there's much I could help someone as experienced ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: Broken Breath
Hey Siren! Shey here for a review! This was a neat poem that I really enjoyed (I start to many review like that, even for short stories)(not really). As a ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: stars
Hey there! Shey here to review! So, nice poem you have here. Normally I would say it's too short, but it gets the point across in a concise yet effective ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: choreography: morning trains
Preposterous! A whole day and no one has review this! I can change that! I don't know what it is about this piece, but I really like it. I haven't ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: When the Cool Kids Come Knocking at My Door
Hello there! Shey here for a review! This was an interesting poem, and I enjoyed it. The back and forth between the two roles were quite interesting, so I'm here ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: Stepfather
Hey there! Sheyren here for a review! Wow is the first thing I want to say. This was outstanding. I have not a lot to complain about, so I'm just ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: Under Imaginary Planets
Hello! Shey here for a review! This was a neat poem, and I don't have much to comment on that was negative. Thus, the things I do comment on will ...
Mar 11, 2017
