seekingthetruth

uh.. really really basic I mean its not heartmelting, its not emotional its just plain orginal and simple. their is no passion in the words their is good use of ...

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right is you are a plagiarism then leave the society because by the looks of this you have just fucked it by copying and pasting this why you have talent ...

just wow so emotive so captivating so heartbreakingly breathtaking. you litertaly lighted my room you filled me with complte shock that you can write like the way you did shows ...

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Hello, This is a well written poem! I love the idea of determination to reach the end... and then realizing that we have tbe ability to do it independently. The ...

very descriptive. really very good contains good analytical verbs, I can really feel the emotion you have with your mum here quite traumatic but this lead it to be quite ...

really good rhyme scheme constant through out. a basic but effective poem showing off your skills. could of done with a change in tone otherwise it just flows .. nicely ...

I am so happy right now it was so great. I enjoyed every bit of it. you could try adding pathetic fallacy and sentence structers but other than that ok. ...

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to be honest I did not even read this because it looked awful and I am only reviewing it to get points because this had no energy and no background ...

very hilarious , you bring laughter into a world full of darkness it made me feel ;like their was nothing bad going on because you distracted me with a picie ...

by far the most emotive thing I have read on here, it made me weep with sadness it made me cry but most of all the amount of emotive language ...

ok just skimmed read this because too me this has no prospects no emotive lauangue it does not speak to me like some others I have read because their is ...

IF YOU ARE GOING TO MOCK DOCTOR WHO IN THIS WAY LET IT BE KNOWN TO YOU THIS WAS THE .. BEST VERSION OF A PARODY OF DOCTOR WHO I ...

right.. uh do not get the whole concept of the story , don't get me wrong it started off really great building up tension and suspense then you go and ...

great sentence structure. spelling needs some work. your first line needs an alteration because if you re read it then you will see that it does not make any sense. ...

the first line does not make any sense. their is no rhyme schme and I get a poem does not have to have one but for this type of poem ...