seekingthetruth

This is really something , you show you have clear understanding on how a story works and structure is impeccable, it would be a real shame if you did not ...

hi seekingthetruth here to give you a great review, I was drawn by your titile it made me want to read , well done. I thought it was going to ...

this is a real masterpiece it has everything a poem should have it has a nice structurer a great plot and a very good title. the tone is very consistent ...

this song really speaks out to me , it was extremely well written and the emotions leapt out a load of tears within me. it was extremely deep. the story ...

I did not fully read it I skimmed through it and it captivated me to read the whole thing because the way you described the underground made me feel like ...

really great imagery used in chapter 1 and I don't know why but it reminded me of jack and the beanstalk, I think it is because you set a fairytale ...

OMG I HOPEI AM NOT GETTING THE WRONG MESSAGE HERE BUT IS YOUR FATHER ABUSING YOU, BECUASE FROM THE EMOTIVE AND EMOTIANL LANAUAGE YOU USED IT CREATES A SEMATIC FIELD ...

so rly did not get the whole idea of the poem it started off with great range of techniques but the next stanza did not really link to the first. ...

can I just say I like the title because it has nothing to do with the moral of the poem/ which I did not really get. I loved the enjambment ...

not what I expected because the title forbidden love I thought it would be about something forbidden you to find that love. any way a great start to what I ...

I was hoping for by the title something a little more toxic and a little longer too. the reason why I hate some small poems is that their is not ...

for someone who hates poetry you did an awesome job. you used imagery and emotive lauauge to get your feelings of poetry across. for me this poem was too short ...

what I liked about it was war theme because you could go in so many directions withit and you chose to talk about a soilder who lost a friend I ...

wow. That was a poem that spoke a truly desperate and harsh message about climtate change. not many people can write something persavie that is good but this my friend ...

is this supposed to be a poem or story because by the title I was expecting a poem. but this story is really really , duplicitous and great what I ...