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wow! this was absulutly amazing

i love it

honestly i cant figure out where he's getting all this stuff and becky if awfully whiny

I really like this poem. Its good but then agian it could just be that i can relate.

this is extremally good. from what i can see from this you should really keep writing. plz read my story, Wounded, and review. You wont be dissipointed.

I like it keep writing.

It's nice a real emotianal piece that everyone can relate to.

I love cant wait to read more.

All true love the similies.

It was ok most of the spelling was right but I noteced a typo on the word But. it happens I just makeing sure you noticed.

i like is simlpy cause i love the warriors but starclan never explanes prophecies directly

i loves it

this is really good. is is going to continue or is this it? if it continues i'd love to read it.

wow! i love this its so original

nice