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Hey GryphonFledgling! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better :-) 3/5/08 090 – Home So much has changed since I ...

Hey Angel! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = WordsI've inserted that I think would work better Pieces of Wooden Glass By Angel of Death His lips were ...

Hey lhighton! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better. Let's do this thing! ‘’Urry up, sir, it’s freezing!’ called ...

Hey Blackmist! Welcome to YWS! Just to remind you the YWS rules are that you must give two reviews or critiques before you post any of your own work. critiques ...

Hey carelessaussie13! Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think work better with your piece. Let's do this thing! "What about stars? What ...

Hey deafwriter! Here's my (Author's Note: I didn't know if horror fits in the Action/Adventure forum. This is a horror novel I'm trying to write. This is a bit of ...

Hey again Kris! Let's see what you got! Hi - i am only posting the first 400 words or so, because i am not sure whether or not it works, ...

Hey TL G-Wooster! Here's the review as promised: Review Key Red = Comments Bold = Words I've inserted that I think could work better. Let's do this thing. Craffter busnes ...

Hey kls night! Welcome to YWS! Anyway, I just wanted to remind you that you should do two reviews befor you post any of your work. I'll crit this anyway ...

Hey SishBee, Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = words/punctuation/sentences that I've inserted. Let's get this party started! The (Narrator) At the beginning, We were there. After we ...

Hey Jamie! In-depth review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/sentences/phrases I've inserted that I think could work better with your piece. Here we go! OK, this is just an ...

Hey Raimunda! Welcome to YWS! You're post looked kind of lonley :( Anyways here's my crit key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/sentences/punctuation that I've inserted. A.N My third character, ...

Hey again Kris! Anyway, here's my review. Same key as always! I gave it to my friend ( a serious, book buff & feelings hurter) hehehe - so i have ...

Hi Bueberry! Welcome to YWS! Anyway here's my review key: Red = Comments bold = Words that I've inserted that might work better. Let's do this thing! Lynn went [s]was[/s] ...

Here's my review key: Red = Comments Bold = Words/phrases/lines that I've inserted to make it sound better. Let's do this thing! I feel bad for posting this story so ...