sarahjane97

Wow, I am very impressed! Your writing flowed so well, the humor was so fresh, and the pace was so consistent, I felt like I was reading the opening chapter ...

Hello! Sarah here to review. :) First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS! This community is very helpful and has a bunch of activities and events for writers! ...

Hi Sparks! :D So, the person above me gave a pretty extensive review with some great pointers. Mostly, they dealt with the writing style/phrasing/descriptions, so I'm gonna try to help ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review! I love the rawness of this poem. So much emotion is crammed in and for once, it's blatant. Poet's often lose feeling in ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review! There are already 2 extensive reviews here, so I hope none of what I say is a repeat. :S Overall, this piece says ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review! As other reviewers have pointed out, this paints a clear and vivid picture in mind. I applaud you! However, this seems more like ...

Hello there! Sarah here for a quick review. :3 Hmmm...this poem came across to me almost like a riddle. Maybe it's the rhyming scheme, or the fact that I'm struggling ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review. :) Well...um..hmm. I'm not really sure how I'm supposed to review this, as I've never seen a riddle submitted on YWS before! Way ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review! Wow, I like this poem. A lot. Usually, I'm all for description and metaphors, but this poem seemed to interpret poetry entirely differently. ...

Hello Panda! Wow, you've got a nice concept on your hands here! I have a soft spot for dark poetry and rhyming, so this piece immediately grabbed my attention. I ...

Hello! Sarah here for a quick review. :) A lot of important points have been brought up already, especially by Dark Pandemonium, but I like this chapter and feel it ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed the nostalgic tone of this piece. I interpreted it as the story of a man yearning for the days before responsibility, when he was still ...

Hello Ingrid! :) Wow, that piece was certainly emotional and powerful! I read it over a few times, and I'm still not entirely sure what it means, but I loved ...

46 comments?!? Congrats! I haven't seen a piece with this many comments for the longest time on YWS! :') Anyway, onto the poem. There seem to be mixed reviews and ...

Hello Alex! Sarah here to review! :) All I can say is wow. I'm so glad to find a story like this amid all the fantasy, action, and (god-forbid) teen ...