sarahcrosbeh

Thanks for all your comments :) I probably won't be doing anything to this, as right now i am working on something else o_0 Whether it will go to plan ...

Wowie, much better than it was beforeeor :) Good job of imrpoving! :D Byes, from Sarah x

Hmmmms, i like this but i aren't entierly sure what it's on about or what it means. Sounds prettty good though.:] Bye, x

"I actually really dislike this and I think I'm gonna just delete it and start over. I guess I was trying too hard; even I admit that. Gosh." Good lord, ...

Well i like this alot, but my gosh, it is extremly short. x

This was good, i liked it :) It's creepy like, but i like it all the same. x

Yo, have you wrote anymore of this story? As i haven't been on here for a while, and i've looked through your portfolioioioi, and it hurt my eyes as there ...

I would of been very confused without the explanation but now i get it, i think it is great. :D x

Wow, I really like this. Good idea, good punctuation. I can't really say anything bad about it, as i know nothing about poems. Anyways, great. x

Wow, i like this. Nice. :)

I like the idea/story in this..but it didn't flow to well..y'know..the rhythm and all. The last line doesn't fit i think... x

Nice Good idea Funny :)

I liked this, it was random and very funny. :D

Ooh i liked this, it was great. I can't really say anything more than that as i don't know anything about the technical side to poems...but i know that i ...

Ooh, definetly improved :) Your really good at description and imagery and all that jazz. :D x