Oh...what can I say. It was beautiful, it was perfect, and yeah, I know my comments are sounding SO cliche; oh, that's the other thing - your poem was so un-cliche, new and original. It's something I've thought about often, so THANK YOU for putting it into words so well for me - the idea of borrowing people's mannerisms to adopt into your own identity to strengthen it rather than weaken it. Marvellous. I cannot pinpoint which lines were my favourite, but it was all heartbreakingly delicate and innocent, so well done
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