sapphireluna

Hello Casanova! Sapphireluna back for another review. As far as lyrics go, this was impressive. Trust me, I've tried writing lyrics, and they are all filled with "oh-oh"s and "yeah"s ...

AWESOME JOB! This is totally burn in summary- I can feel Eliza in your poem. The only thing is that some of the lines you wrote: "I'm erasing 'us' from ...

It's late so I can't write a full review- but as your fellow Hamilton Fan Club member I have full appreciation for this poem and I thoroughly enjoyed it. So ...

Hello! This was a very emotion filled, realistic story. There are many many stories about imaginary friends leaving, so as far as originality goes, I would give it an 7/10. ...

WOW. This was a very very very well thought out and well written poem!! My favorite line has to be "fingertips stained with stardust". Where in the world did you ...

Hello! sapphireluna back for another review. This was a well written rap/song with well rhymed lyrics. I enjoyed the choruses a lot, and something I noticed is that they are ...

I thought this was a very well written song! I really really really enjoyed this part: Pull the plug I'm crying All the wonderful places I'll never go The desert ...

Hello! Your story is the definition of short and sweet. It start out expressing happiness, safety and warmth and ends showing the sorrow after a breakup because of distance, (which ...

sapphireluna back for yet another review. This poem was quite good! It is very true and is filled with deep emotion. I can see this person is struggling through depression ...

sapphireluna back for yet another review! OH. MY. GOSH. This is the best short story I have ever read in my entire life. I have so so so so so ...

Hello! This was a pretty good short story with an interesting plot twist I didn't see coming. However, there could be some improvements so I'm going to get right into ...

Hey hey! -How does he not know his very own sister was raped? I mean- it's his sister! Maybe it's a part of why the narator is saying I missed ...

HELLO! I'm actually very impressed! This is a very well written and thought out piece. Here are just a few things to look out for: 1. Slow down! I feel ...

Imagine a river or a stream with clear blue water. And it flows in one direction very smoothly except for a few turns here and there, and some jagged rocks ...

WOW! You know what? I have nothing negative to say about this. So what I'm going to do is make this my first ever review with ALL POSITIVE feedback! To ...