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Re: Hiding Within
Hello, Ruby here to review this really great piece of work. As a person who has struggled with anxiety, this was the best short poem I've read in a while. ...
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Re: Doll Disease
Hello, Ruby here to review your poem :) I was drawn in by the title of this poem 'Doll Disease'. Even before reading I was wondering exactly what this could ...
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Re: Cosmic Queen
Hi, Ruby here for a quick review :) Always a fan of anything written about the mysterious night sky, this piece caught my attention even just from the title. The ...
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Re: My Piano
Hello, Ruby here for a review! Music and poetry both have a special place in my heart, so you've really hooked me with this one. I'm kind of in love ...
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Re: Silver Fish
Hi, Ruby here for a review :) This was a funny little poem, and I quite liked it. As a vegan, I enjoyed the subject of a fish escaping a ...
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Re: Who am I?
Hi GreenTulip, Ruby here for a review :) I like the subject of this poem because identity crisis is something that happens to anyone. I think that a younger audience ...
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Re: when i grow up
Hi, Ruby here for a review :) I like the concept for this. I've written a few poems trying to place myself in a child-like mindset again because it can ...
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Re: Music is Powerful
Hello, Ruby here for ANOTHER review (ha ha) :) Well, first off I must say that I agree with this poem one hundred percent. Music is my life as well, ...
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Re: Yesterdays Makeup (Rhyming)
Hello, Ruby here for a review :) Okay, I really enjoyed the topic of this piece. Using the superficialness of makeup to parallel to the superficialness of girls (or people ...
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Re: Spirits
Hi, Ruby here to review :) This is one of the first poems I've read like this. I like that instead of just blatantly saying that you've been drinking or ...
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Re: We Are One
Hi, Ruby here for a quick review of this :) I like the idea of this poem. It's always interesting to read about someone who is going through that sort ...
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Re: War Prayer
Hello, Ruby here to review another one of your poems, and again this is really good. Overall, I like this piece. I'm not a big fan of war anything, just ...
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Re: Fog
Hi, Ruby here for a review! This poem is actually really beautiful. Nature poems can hold such impressionable images, and this one certainly does. You didn't just provide sight, you ...
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Re: Ignite Me
Hello, Ruby here for a review! So the topic of this poem is really interesting. I like the idea of this paradox fire, one that heals with its passion instead ...
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Re: Poetry
Hello, Ruby here for a review :) I think this is such an interesting idea for a poem- one about poetry. Not something that you see too often, but when ...
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