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Hi there Samantha, Roxy here! I can see that this was written a while back, but since I am already here, I might as well review! :) First off - ...

Hi there, roxy here! I know that you posted this up here quite a few months ago, but I just happened to stumble across it today and so decided I ...

Hi there Snoweary, Roxy here! :) I think that it is a lovely poem, i am not a big God believer myself, but I can still appreciate the feeling and ...

Hi there deliroast, Roxy here! :) On first reading the piece seems quite stiff with awkward sentences, Its like you were conservative in what you were writing and didnt let ...

Hi there lisy, Roxy here! :) I think that the Idea you have here is a good one, I just feel that you could have executed a bit better! For ...

Hi Repose! This is a fantastic piece, but I cant help but wonder if it'd be better suited to another section, maybe other? It seemed like more of a prose ...

Hi there IHI, Roxy here! :) I think that this is a really fantastically interesting poem! The process of going insane..very hard to capture, but I think that you are ...

Hi there recycledsoul, Roxy here! :) Its an interesting concept, I love question poems! :) But I would love if you tried to give some answers to these questions, just ...

Hi there Roxy here as requested! :) I think that you need to work on the form of this poem a bit, its quite distracting to read through! I think ...

Hi Roxy here reviewing as you wished! :) First off I have to agree with Kaylyn, the spacing needs to be fixed! Its very distracting to the reader! And some ...

Hi there! Roxy here! :) I really like the poem and the emotion running through it! The insecurity of entering a new relationship is very relatable and very well done! ...

Hi ktarantino! Roxy here! :) This is a really powerful poem that is beautifully written! I love the comparison on the "summer calm" and the, the "battle cry" of the ...

hi there, roxy here! I see that most of the gramatical stuff has been taken care of down below so I wont go through it again! I can feel the ...

Hi Roxy here! :) I see the concept that you were aiming for here, but I think that you need to work on it a little bit more to achieve ...

Hi there Roxy here! :) The conceptfor this poem is certainly an interesting one! I havent read a lot of pieces like it before! So I like the originality of ...