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Re: hurt
hey! my sweet recipient! your work length is short, but it is a very amazing stuff. i like it. you have involved every emotion very sweetly. i loved your first ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Whats Inside Your Head
hey! rishabh here! your work is very good. i loved it. its sweet and mellifluous! now points which i want to discuss here: 1] your work is nice, there are ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: Innocence
hey! tiny. your poem is sweet and mellifluous. it is quite naturilistic as well(it is my word just invented). , which pulled me into your poem. very good attempt and ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: The Feeling I Felt
hey! what a great writing style you have! quite impressive. now where your stuff needs a hand: 1] don't use commas in every line. 2] somewhere use (.) full stops. ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: Hummingbirds heartbeat wings
is it a poem? really? hey! i am Rishabh parmar. this is the first question, which came into my mind after reading your stuff! it is a nice poem but ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: 50 hours straight
hey auxiira! your poem is fabulous. you have inserted- your entire betty feelings into this! quite good. you told us about your brother that gives kinda notorious touch to your ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: Counting Questions
hey! your poem is very nice. you have shown every emotions very clearly. now i want to review your poem from top to bottom.... in your first stanza, you started ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: little girls and their polished fingertips
hey! its a nice poetry. the length is also good. stanzas are properly placed on right positions. i enjoyed your poetry from top to bottom. you started with fine line, ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Show Us The Way - Chapter 1
hey ! your stuff is very touchy, i like the way u framed it. your writing style is also good. this is very nice story of a girl anne...(this name ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Your reality
hmm......hmm...here's ur review..this poem of urs is very pessimistic towards life. but i m thinking that u hv rose good questions in ur stuff........this is nice short poem to read ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: The Woman In The Trees.
oh! beautiful creation. i loved the way u characterized woman with wind. it was really good. ur figuration was also nice. the stanzas are of low length....but length doesnt matter ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Something Deep
it is not so depressive! it is good! u hv shown how a girl's pain. nice and heart touching concept. i started feeling your stuff right from the beginning. what ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: The GR-8 Discovery- Prologue
hey! shiksha! great prologue, it includes every thing, which a 'stable' prologue needs, you are fab in writing this prologue, it woke up my head in thinking that what's next! ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: First Night Out: Part 1
wow, it is nice sexy stuff. you have written a good stuff! In your piece, you involved a better vocab-section which is highly required while writing such stuffs, so that ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Teen Ethics and Morals
wow! ur whole stuff is praiseworthy! it is better, i really enjoyed when u said teenagers should focus on poliyics! grt! as a teenager don't follow mark zuckerburg or bill ...
Jun 30, 2013
