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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: redwoods

    hi! it is a nice short attempt but not very nice. you should put some more stuff into it. but what you have written is not bad at all. its ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Body is Not a Temple

    hey amigo@ take a chill pill! plan some vacation for yourself. your poem is good. little short but full on entertaining. this piece is lil depressive but elaborates good emotions. ...

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

    hi manisha! great work. You made me emotional. what a great poem it is! i liked it. you have written it very beautifully. Right from the starting, an interest kind ...

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: When I Learned To Believe

    hey! Your poetry is good but not able to connect reader emotinally. this is not sounding like poetry it is better to be a short story or something creative. my ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Lingering of Lust

    hey! what a sexy poem you have written. great work. i love the emotions hidden inside this poetry. you used the correct words in correct places. you made justice with ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Devil In Me

    hey shiksha! I have read your work and the story is perfectly fine. It is a short story, but i got lots of goosebumps while reading it. Great. Now, where ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Habibiti

    hey! i like your experiment and i like those people who are trying to establish themselves as an inventor in this field. your work touched my inner soul, i felt ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life Goes On.

    hey! your poetry is awesome. the philosophical content which you plot here was good. you wrote this peice with lot of emotions. this is your first poetry work i will ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    hey ! it is a beautiful poem with wonderful emotions, hidden inside this piece. "It's her" this title also supports your thoughts very beautifully. The dialogue representation in your work ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Culture Re: Culture

    hey! your work is awesome. i like it. your thoughts about culture are simple but very effective. Your presentation of thoughts is also great. where your work disappointed me : ...

    Aug 11, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: World peace

    hey buddy! your work is too good. your thoughts are simple but very effective. through your writing, it seem that your thought process is quite good. your idea on world ...

    Aug 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Russian Roulette

    hey! so i start my review with some positive points.......your starting lines are really nice. it suits your genre........you started well with " one chance to save us......." and ended ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Walk

    hey! your poem is not bad at all! it's short and sweet poem. very mellifluous, rhythm is fair.....but i know you will improve. the way you have introduced your stuff ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I need to write.

    hey! first i will start my review from a positive note.....your poem is good, very understandable, very still, very quiescent. i like your rhythm also, very mellifluous. your questionings are ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Give me Love

    hey! my lovely recipient! time for another review. this poem is far more better than the previous one. you have written your every work with great precision. again i am ...

    Jul 13, 2013


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