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Re: redwoods
hi! it is a nice short attempt but not very nice. you should put some more stuff into it. but what you have written is not bad at all. its ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: My Body is Not a Temple
hey amigo@ take a chill pill! plan some vacation for yourself. your poem is good. little short but full on entertaining. this piece is lil depressive but elaborates good emotions. ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.
hi manisha! great work. You made me emotional. what a great poem it is! i liked it. you have written it very beautifully. Right from the starting, an interest kind ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: When I Learned To Believe
hey! Your poetry is good but not able to connect reader emotinally. this is not sounding like poetry it is better to be a short story or something creative. my ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: The Lingering of Lust
hey! what a sexy poem you have written. great work. i love the emotions hidden inside this poetry. you used the correct words in correct places. you made justice with ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: The Devil In Me
hey shiksha! I have read your work and the story is perfectly fine. It is a short story, but i got lots of goosebumps while reading it. Great. Now, where ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Habibiti
hey! i like your experiment and i like those people who are trying to establish themselves as an inventor in this field. your work touched my inner soul, i felt ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Life Goes On.
hey! your poetry is awesome. the philosophical content which you plot here was good. you wrote this peice with lot of emotions. this is your first poetry work i will ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: It's her.
hey ! it is a beautiful poem with wonderful emotions, hidden inside this piece. "It's her" this title also supports your thoughts very beautifully. The dialogue representation in your work ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Culture
hey! your work is awesome. i like it. your thoughts about culture are simple but very effective. Your presentation of thoughts is also great. where your work disappointed me : ...
Aug 11, 2013 -
Re: World peace
hey buddy! your work is too good. your thoughts are simple but very effective. through your writing, it seem that your thought process is quite good. your idea on world ...
Aug 11, 2013 -
Re: Russian Roulette
hey! so i start my review with some positive points.......your starting lines are really nice. it suits your genre........you started well with " one chance to save us......." and ended ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: My Walk
hey! your poem is not bad at all! it's short and sweet poem. very mellifluous, rhythm is fair.....but i know you will improve. the way you have introduced your stuff ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: I need to write.
hey! first i will start my review from a positive note.....your poem is good, very understandable, very still, very quiescent. i like your rhythm also, very mellifluous. your questionings are ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Give me Love
hey! my lovely recipient! time for another review. this poem is far more better than the previous one. you have written your every work with great precision. again i am ...
Jul 13, 2013
