hey amigo@
take a chill pill! plan some vacation for yourself. your poem is good. little short but full on entertaining. this piece is lil depressive but elaborates good emotions. in my opinion, your poetry is inspiration for other readers, who are feeling same as you. the title is also good, very catchy. you explained very clearly in your poem about relation between people and temple. you showed true picture!
over all grt work. keep writing!
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