rishabh

hey..friend!! your stuff is good. i sensed maturity in your content. you explained exactly about individuality, which very few people understand. From starting to the end your piece was mind ...

HEY! Your piece is good. it is a short little poem, quite understandable. you used simple and catchy words which are making your poem interesting. It is a bit raw ...

hey! this poem is good and while reading i reminded my childhood days when i call myself don after watching amitabh bachan's (famous actor in bollywood) movie. i sensed same ...

hey! your work is short and simple, easy to understand and very good pattern of rhythm you used in this poem. please PM me i want to understand the meaning ...

hey! this work is nice. i loved this creative work. from starting you developed a suspense which is good. i liked the poetic style. i love the you have set ...

this is a nice horror story...........i loved it. your work is fab. this short story reminded my creation when i was 15..."berculious and the magical flame"..........watever.....past is past. but you ...

hey! your poetry is good and sounds like i am listening any gothic metal rock.i loved it. it's length is also good. i love it.........your writing style is fabulous. the ...

hey! i love your sweet, simple, creative poem. your personification level is good. just polish it a bit more. these two stanzas in your poem are quite well constructed. you ...

hey Dreamwork! your work is quite good. i loved your way of writing poem. you have described some conversation in form of poetry, which is good. it is very creative ...

hey alfonso! This is not a poem, it is a single thought. so better to elongate a bit. maybe in two or three different paras (three lines in each para). ...

hey! Candrew! i loved your piece and i say that the poem is nice. but it shows lackness in rhythmic tone. this lackness somewhere made your peom a bit like ...

hey! great work, first of all. I loved your work. How have you written this piece. i want to know really. This work is exceptionally good. you have plot an ...

HEY! Your work is nice but not satisfactory. You need to write everything in past tense except dialogue part. There are some huge grammatical mistakes also, which was generating hindrance ...

hi! your work is mind blowing. good. i like your writing style. you plot everything in equal quantity. the work without proportion is like fish without water. you made a ...

hey u have written a nice piece.....this poem tells every thing about break up. the starting of this poem is very touchy....i was feeling very connected with your poem while ...