ringettegirl

sorry it took me soo long to edit!! i've been really busey! about the too much info thing... i don't know what to take out.. rather i can't deside what ...

this is chapter one of my novel and i need crits!! hope you enjoy! ------------------------------------------------ CHAPTER ONE “Hey, Evan, wait up!” Evan looked over her shoulder. Colleen, her be

This is somthing new to me. I don't really know how to writ this kind of story. i'm just trying somthing new. I'v added a couple of things but i ...

CHAPTER TWO Evan woke with a start. She rolled over to shut off her alarm. She didn’t want to go to school today. What she didn’t want to do is ...

it's just somthing i'm working on.... um again i'm new at this... enjoy it is now the editted version! thanks for all of those that whave read this short story... ...

Chapter Three “ What do you want Cory? I thought I told you to leave me alone!” “You did but I decided not to.” “Look I don’t want to go ...

Rejection I took my place in the music room. And I sit there waiting for him. He comes in as usual. So casual and yet a look of indifference on ...

I don't know if this should go in the historical fiction or in fantasy fiction.... if you could mention that in the crit's that would be great! thanks! and enjoy. ...

Prologue Philip walked briskly down the corridor. Maney had only but minutes before informed him that the Lady of Lessex had come to call and was waiting for him in ...

Chapter One “Elise! Elise come here! Oh please, I need your help.” Pauline cried from her dorm room down the hall. I sighed. All I wanted was a little time ...

Okay so, this is just the start. and please don't spare me anything! Critt the hell out of it! please. thanks Ringettegirl. [u]The Legacy, the Chase, My Life[/u] This whole ...

But that’s just the life I’m living right now. Usually my life is pretty busy. I mean with all the traveling and “helping” people, I don’t normally have time to ...

Chapter One Today is Monday. The worst day of the week. Not only am I sore, but I also have three major presentations in German, French and Spanish. Ugh! I ...

okay, so before you stat reading, i'm really sorry its been really long! i've forgotten to keep up with posting and everything! but this is the last of chapter one! ...