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Omg so sorry a typo on my part! The swing part.i love! I meant the end of the sentence -who swing from trees that just remind me

No actual way! Are we a duoact? Are we having a comeback? Are we a sugarbabe? %uD83D%uDE02

Hey. I know this is a late reply but share away if you haven't already!

Hi thank for the review! :) purple bruises are a sign of lukemia, but I could have made that clearer. The poison is reference to chemo. And 360 was because ...

Hey :) I don't usually do rhyme so thanks for the feedback. But she requested a rhyming poem for her two year old funeral so I wasn't about to say ...

Thank you very much!

Hey. Standard form and punctuation have never been my style, but thanks for the comment!

Hey! It's reference to four endings of texts. The line before talking about the tale ending, followed then by four endings. Romeo and Juliet, Dorothy in oz, the Lord of ...

Thanks for the reviw! the binary codes say "help me", the second "help", the third "i will burn you". Glad you liked it!!!

Thanks for the reviw! the binary codes say "help me", the second "help", the third "i will burn you". Glad you liked it!!!

Thanks for the review! Jack and Gordon are references to alcohol (jac Daniels and Gordon gin) and my style is because it's a slam poem so it's just said like ...

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Hello! Retro here for a review. I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) You have a lot of sort of repetition in your piece, which ...

Breathtaking. Absolutely breathtaking. This is so simple and beautiful and you've managed to create such a personal connection with the reader. You're use of Berlin and the idea of tearing ...

I think that is so much better now in my personal opinion!

Fantastic, simply fantastic. I literally cannot say anything else Well done Retro