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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Retro here! Just want to say I love this poem. I think it is beautifully written, and the context is the sort of thing that hits home to me. I ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Truly Unforgiven

    Hey Retro here for a wee review! Forgiveness is an interesting topic to write about in my opinion because it is so much easier to write from the other side ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: We All Start Somewhere

    Hey Retro here for a review. I really enjoy the idea here in the poem, I think it was well done for the most part and quite neat. I just ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How Does if Feel to Suck?

    Hey! Retro here for a review! First of I wanted to say that this is brilliant and fantastic and incredible. so a very well done my friend! Though your formatting ...

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: To my fellow love gambler

    Hey Retro here for a review. First of I just wanted to say that this is an absolutely fantastic poem; one of the best I have read in a significant ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Culture, Dramatic Re: The Mistress

    Hey Retro here for a review. This is really well written erotic and moving piece. I feel as though your characterization of 'the mistress' is really well done and that ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let Me Scream

    Hey, Retro here for a review. First of all I think it is a really neat idea you have it. The whole sort of figuring out your own mind sort ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: La Petit Mort

    Hey Retro here for a review, I have got to say this is one of the best poems I have ever read. I study French at university, so was very ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Satire Re: Foreign language in Poetry

    Hey! Retro here to review! I loved it haha. I don't know the dutch but I certainly speak French so i'm assuming that it has something to the extent of ...

    Mar 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Daisy

    Hey! Retro here to do a wee review! First of i'd like to say that you have some nice imagery here, like the bit about the ivy. I like what ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Too Many of Us

    Hey Retro here to do a little review :) The thing about this poem is that it is a little too punchy. If you're going to do a shorter poem ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: Conformity, a Virtue

    Hey Retro here! I just want to say i adore this poem, so much you got a like! The use of almost aside like comments is sublime it really gives ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Play!

    Hey Retro here! First of just want to say WOW! I really really enjoyed this and i think you have an excellent idea which you portray well. You have good ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: mirror.

    Yo! Retro here! First of, and don't take this personally, did you write this? Just because of the whole font thing i'm just curious. Regardless i shall put on my ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Please Realize

    Hello! Retro here! First i'd like to say sorry about your time with the friend! it must be tough! Hope it gets better soon! Secondly, i'd like to say i ...

    Mar 3, 2014


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