rbt00

First of all... Hats off to your tremendous poem. It Really is AhMazin. Its not always to use rhyming schemes. So i guess you had decided not use any rhymes ...

The message you are actually trying to convey is really good. You dont like wars and want peace but the title you have used looks uninteresting. It should have been ...

Hats off to your amazing work. I Really loved it. Your a talented person. With more hard work and all you can do much better. In the last verse .. ...

Hats off to your marvelous work! I loved the message you have conveyed and i appreciate you for all the efforts you have put up here! though it had some ...

First of all applause to the wonderful poem you have just written.. I really liked the last two lines .. You had one spelling mistake you wrote bussiness instead of ...

As far as my concern It really doesn't matters if you rhyme a poem or not but if you are rhyming a poem then the format should be either A ...

The poem is short but as far as my concern it really does not matters on how long or short the poem is. If your rhyming the poem you need ...

I Appreciate Your Work and the words you have used to make the poem more interesting. It Creates An enthusiasm in the readers mind. Keep up the good work But ...

Hello Id Like to suggest a few things Maybe you had a typing mistake but it is made and not maade. In the second line You need to write it ...

The story was okay but i think you need more practice I am not saying that it was bad but it would be better if you would improve your grammar ...

I Dont think this can be called as a poem? Rhyming is not necessary but look you didnt use capital letters for the beginning of the sentences I Didnt get ...

Okay first of all you need to use poetic language, I Dont say you didnt use it but i think it needs improvement The lines The fire on his face. ...

You used amazing words to rhyme your poem I liked the message you conveyed but i guess it would require more important like mostly in grammar . And using capital ...

Okay So while writing a poem things you need to keep in mind are Capital letters. Your beginning letters are not in capital so i would advise you to do ...

This is a really short poem and i dont think this could exactly be called a poem Yeah , you did use rhyming words but in a poem the format ...