This poem is very sentimental, It could have been better if you focused on something good since poetry looks better that way and alot of feeling is given to it. For e.g:- The gushing wind, love, tea and hugs. The poem it self is beautiful and it is actually a peice which makes the readers feel your pain.
Well just so you know, I have been through the same and this brings back some bitter memories.
Disturbing work and thats the art, you know that you make the reader feel it.
Good job. I hope life gets better for you.
Points: 817
Reviews: 16
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