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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Two Spectrums

    Hello, Duncan! racket here to review your story! I really, really like this. Being heterosexual myself, it was interesting to read this story from a gay perspective. You conveyed emotion ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Hell

    Hello Kathryn! racket here to review your poem. Well. This is kind of dark and depressing... But you made that atmosphere, and I think that's what you were going for, ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Voices

    Hello, Yui! I love your avatar... Okay, racket here to review this poem! Wow, So, I really like this. I think anyone could relate to this, in that there's always ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I'm... A Dreamer

    Hello! racket here to review your poem! Is your name actually Winston? O.O If it is, lucky you, 'cause you got an awesome name. I am jealous... XD Okay, so, ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Chance It

    Hello BlueDaisy! racket here to review your work! I really like this! I think everyone can relate to this, which is always a goal when writing anything. I like your ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Rainy Home (Edited)

    Hello, Rosebug! racket here to review your work! I really like this! I've written some similar stuff to this, so I can relate with both the girl and your writing ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Endangered

    Hello paula! racket here to review your work! Okay, I really like this, it's very emotional and well done. Good job! I really enjoyed this! My first suggestion would to ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Hey, Dad.

    Hey there, Jupiter! racket here to review your poem. All I can say is, I can totally relate. Just kidding, that is not all I can say, but yeah, this ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Our Time Game Called Life

    Hello Chrissy! racket here to review your work! Okay, well, I really, really like this poem. Very well portrayed and we can all relate to this. The idea is awesome, ...

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Our Dream

    Hello, Neverland! racket here to review this poem. Okay, well, I really like this. It conveys a lot of emotions that the reader can really relate to. Dysfunctional relationships and ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Perfect Night

    Hello! racket here to review your short poem! I really like this! Short and sweet and very well said and done. Good job! There's nothing really at first glance for ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Universe[ity]

    Hello kenzie! racket here to review your poem. Well, this is an interesting read. This does fit its name, that's for sure. I only have a couple suggestions for you, ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Demigod Poem

    NAJA, I love this!! Good job! Dang, you just made me really happy... XD So, you already know I love it, so I'm gonna go straight to being nit-picky, as ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Dear Rapunzel

    Hello, Sunset, racket here to review your poem! Well, I've seen this movie multiple times, so I get the whole thing. XD Good job! I'm wondering as to if this ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Jelly Stuff!

    Hello there! racket here to review this interesting little piece of poetry! Well. XD This is interesting! Okay, well, I have about three suggestions for you. Well, the first is ...

    Sep 12, 2015


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott