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Re: Like the Wind
helloo! I want to begin with saying that I absolutely love this poem. It's original which makes it even better XD I don't have any criticism for you really..I just ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
hellooo my SOLLYPLUSHIEEE!!!!!! I'm going to review this..well actually I'm just going to say that I like it!! XD This made me crack up! =D Favorite part: Yep, my dear ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Slight Smiles
helloo I absolutely love this poem!! This puts a smile on my face :) I don't have any criticism for you..I'm just gonna quote my favorite parts XD: I love ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Painful Reminders
helloo, I want to start of with: This is absolutely beautiful and sad! You have captured that feeling of being hurt very well in this is so sad when things ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: To Be Cool.
helloo :) This is a good write..It's true that people these days think they have to be like that to be 'cool'.. You must dress this way to be cool. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
hellloow shiney :) I love this you already know XD I really don't have any criticism for you.. :) I think a lot of christians can relate to this..especially the ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Raison de L'insomnie
helloo!! :) *bamboozler hug* At first I want to say that this is a great write..I really like this as a poem on its may be short but it has ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful Boy
helloo :) I love this poem!!! good work! I have one correction though: How beautiful you are, boy The love inside you give me joy, I think -give- should be ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Love To Be.
hellooo :) nice poem! I like it..I don't have any criticism for you because the others aready took care of that :) I'm just gonna quote my favorite part XD ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Old musketeer
helloo!! :) I like this poem! Love the story in it! Oh small child of mine do you hear The old stories of that one musketeer How he fought and ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Walls
helloo :) beautiful poem/story!!! you captured those feelings really well!! I don't have any criticism..:) I just really enjoyed readig this nice work!! -qaralynn-
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Small farm
helloo! :) nice poem! I like the rhyme in it and I like the imagery!! Little fish in the pond swimming so free The birds in the sky flying with ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Open, simple
helloo :) really sweet poem!! I don't really have any criticism :) Life isn't as simple as you make it appear Even the happy people have a depth full of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Imagine Me and You..
heellloo XD nice sweet poem! I love the imagery in this. It calms me down! :) Imagine me and you on a ship, on a broken wooden mass; we float. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Trust
beautiful poem!! you've captured the feleings very well in this write!! Trust. A funny Five letter word You blew mine away absolutely love these two sentences Like dust My world ...
May 1, 2011