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Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 1)
I read this series you wrote and i really liked it,it has a suspense to it and was written well! i just thought i would give a review! Firstly,the sentence ...
Dec 21, 2021 -
Re: Wednesdays
Hey!I am @potter4life Just wanted to review some of your work and recommend stuff for your piece! it is quite interesting,using literature devices and things like similies and more. i ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: An Adventure From Another Wizard
Hello!I am @potter4life and i am here to review your work! First of all,I would like to tel you that this was a good piece of work that you have ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: The runaway car
Hello @legolas1122 im @potter4life and im here to review your story! Firstly,this was a good job since it was your first story and i would like to point out some ...
Jun 19, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 31)
HEYYYYYYY! Im here for a review! I really liked this chapter so i went to read the chapters before was a really good book,so i just wanted to point out ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Nine
Hi felistia:) Im @potter4life and im here for a review! I just wanted to point out some things that may help you along the way! So the plot line was ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: The Girl of Dreams - Prologue
Hi @Quennie! i am @potter4life and i am here for a review! I just wanted to point out some things you can improve on for this story!It was really interesting ...
May 28, 2020 -
Re: The Demon Lord and His Empty Heaven
Hi raesvaughn,I am here for a review:] So i thought that it was a pretty nice story! you could improve on it a bit though,like here, He was neither god ...
May 25, 2020 -
Re: The Last Step
Hi!I am here for a review! So firstly, Do a spell check of the story and focus on the proper spacing and punctuation. Make sure that the beginning of each ...
May 22, 2020 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 13
HI! I am here for a review:] I quite enjoyed you work but there are some places that you could improve on. Firstly,you could use a little more show not ...
May 21, 2020 -
Re: Unusual Noises Part-2
Hi!I am here for a review!I just wanted to say that i really liked the plotline,but i do not quite understand why they fainted?But it was a really good story ...
May 20, 2020 -
Re: Unusual Noises Part-1
Hi!I am here for a review...! So i just wanted to point out some mistakes you have made, So, Here,you said that “Ok then I will also join..” said Drake ...
May 18, 2020 -
Re: The Plight of Dying Gods: A Prelude
Hi!I am here for a review! So when i was reading your work,i realised that when you write you speech,it looks jumbled up with you sentences,so i reccommend you to ...
May 18, 2020 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 12
Hi ! Im here for a review! Just want to point out a few things ya, So basically,your story was nice,but you can improve on a few things, like On ...
May 16, 2020 -
Re: Nature
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May 14, 2020
That is a good choice of words! "I have always loved Nature. I love how trees and flowers lose their leaves every Autumn and become skeletons, shadows of their former ...