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Re: Darkness
This is so sad. It really makes me feel sorry in an appropriate way for the narrator. I am left with two questions. This could be seen as a suicide, ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: How did it feel Felipe?
Hi! I'm pizzaroll. I just felt like taking my mind off things by browsing the poetry section, and stumbled across this piece. This poem gave me a harrowing feeling of ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey, it's just another teenage person wasting her life on YWS. But hi! Not wanting to just slam down problems I noticed, I briefly skimmed through the reviews below. You ...
Dec 24, 2017 -
Re: Colors
This is a really adorable piece. I love how you added in the colors one by one, and amalgamated them well. The rhyming does seem forced at times, so perhaps ...
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: Never Date Me I'm Bad At Feeling
This is a gem right here. I love it. Your words are hilarious and I can relate to this so bad. I have to admit I've never drank coffee of ...
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: buried things
okay you've made me cry. i am drowning my sorrows in poems and reviewing because i love them and i spend all my time reading YWS poems and it's just ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: one last card game
oh my goodness... this kinda made me tear up. wow. you evoke strong emotions in your readers. i do have a question that i don't want to forget, and that's ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: Falling Stars
Hi! I'm your friendly neighborhood pizzaroll. :D I loved the similies and descriptions you used in your poem. I could really *feel* the imagery as if I were the one ...
Nov 19, 2017 -
Re: Is that okay?
Yes it's okay. Well, for me to feel like this, but it's not okay for you, cause I don't want anyone else feeling like that and it makes me sad ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: Ana's Games
I've been an off and on recovering and relapsing anorexic teen for over a year now... on August 19th, I was 196 lbs. Now, Sept. 7th, I'm 184 lbs. Twelve ...
Sep 8, 2017 -
Re: she calls me selfish
0₩0 dear satan why is your poetry so good and delightfully written. I LOVE this poem from start to finish. My mind is wandering but I totally agree with this ...
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: What we could have been
I feel like this could be a song. A sad song. From a girl to a boy, or a boy to a girl, or whomever to whomever. There seems to ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Drum Major
Hey there! This poem was bookmarked awhile ago, and I apologize for putting off a review. I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Forget Me
Hello! I've had this poem bookmarked for...over a year, it seems!! I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give feedback on and give a ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: tarot doves
Hi there, Marmalade! (Can I just off-the-bat point out that your writing is like Laurie Halse Anderson's, like you are a younger yet blossoming version of her? I really mean ...
Apr 7, 2017
