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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Darkness

    This is so sad. It really makes me feel sorry in an appropriate way for the narrator. I am left with two questions. This could be seen as a suicide, ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: How did it feel Felipe?

    Hi! I'm pizzaroll. I just felt like taking my mind off things by browsing the poetry section, and stumbled across this piece. This poem gave me a harrowing feeling of ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye

    Hey, it's just another teenage person wasting her life on YWS. But hi! Not wanting to just slam down problems I noticed, I briefly skimmed through the reviews below. You ...

    Dec 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    This is a really adorable piece. I love how you added in the colors one by one, and amalgamated them well. The rhyming does seem forced at times, so perhaps ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Never Date Me I'm Bad At Feeling

    This is a gem right here. I love it. Your words are hilarious and I can relate to this so bad. I have to admit I've never drank coffee of ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: buried things

    okay you've made me cry. i am drowning my sorrows in poems and reviewing because i love them and i spend all my time reading YWS poems and it's just ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: one last card game

    oh my goodness... this kinda made me tear up. wow. you evoke strong emotions in your readers. i do have a question that i don't want to forget, and that's ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Falling Stars

    Hi! I'm your friendly neighborhood pizzaroll. :D I loved the similies and descriptions you used in your poem. I could really *feel* the imagery as if I were the one ...

    Nov 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Is that okay?

    Yes it's okay. Well, for me to feel like this, but it's not okay for you, cause I don't want anyone else feeling like that and it makes me sad ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Ana's Games

    I've been an off and on recovering and relapsing anorexic teen for over a year now... on August 19th, I was 196 lbs. Now, Sept. 7th, I'm 184 lbs. Twelve ...

    Sep 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    0₩0 dear satan why is your poetry so good and delightfully written. I LOVE this poem from start to finish. My mind is wandering but I totally agree with this ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: What we could have been

    I feel like this could be a song. A sad song. From a girl to a boy, or a boy to a girl, or whomever to whomever. There seems to ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Drum Major

    Hey there! This poem was bookmarked awhile ago, and I apologize for putting off a review. I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Forget Me

    Hello! I've had this poem bookmarked for...over a year, it seems!! I honestly have so many writing works that I want to review and give feedback on and give a ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: tarot doves

    Hi there, Marmalade! (Can I just off-the-bat point out that your writing is like Laurie Halse Anderson's, like you are a younger yet blossoming version of her? I really mean ...

    Apr 7, 2017


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