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Ok, this had a bit more meaning than "Tears" which i read and commented on a few minutes ago. Anyway, it's a nice piece but there are a few mistakes ...

Hmmmm...I don't know what to think of this. Its a bit strange to read and take in. I can't help but think that somethings are missing from it but the ...

Wow...I wont lie because this is really really sad and a bit depressing. But, with the sad and negative view of it kinda makes it a bit more touching. My ...

Nice nice nice. Even though i am a guy reading this, i cant help but fall for it. Am not going to correct you much but just say that you ...

I read this poem, left it on and a friend read it...he got a very very profane meaning to the whole poem and truthfully, i was tempted to take that ...

in a bliss right now. After reading this poem, i read it three more times again and i've gotta tell you, am hooked. Totally different from "better times ahead". I ...

Truthfully, its a rather nice piece...but i somehow get the impression that am i don't know what am actually reading about. Ok, one thing you need is some commas and ...

Well, i've got to say, this poem is little bit of a mystery to me since it seems to pull me to something i don't know. At the beginning i ...

Ok...quite good. Even though am not an expert in writing myself i've just got to say, the humor is in it but not quite the crazy laughter kind like i ...

I wont lie. Its a good poem...Only good, not great. It has the ability to develop well into something great. One thing is that people have seem several love poems ...

Wow...after reading this, i wanted to take it and show it to my girlfriend. So, it's good, quite feminine really even though am not a female. What I'd advise is ...

Well, firstly, it was a good poem...had it ups and downs. But the truth is, you could have made it order. To make it in a bit of an orderly ...

Well...that was interesting. I won't lie, it's greatly written and has a lot of potential to be better. It looks like you kinda rushed in writing it and didn't actually ...

ok, was very nice. The three lines were actually my favorites and had some sense of "funness" in reading. As i like poems with rhymes, i found yours very great. ...

Truth is, i really like it and it has a lot of message within it all. You just need a bit of help with a few punctuations and also some ...