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I really enjoyed this.
Titled got me straight away. I was just sort of scanning through and it was like... oh that looks interesting. Boom. I love the simplicity of the length and how its not just full of drooping descriptive stanzas, yet the words are brave and add that complexity all on their own. 
"She is the sublime signature,
Showing the collision between sanity and sin"
That ending, oh that ending. Sweet (particularly the sanity and sin part- kind of reminded me of Donnie Darko). Kudos.
ok, was very nice. The three lines were actually my favorites and had some sense of "funness" in reading. As i like poems with rhymes, i found yours very great.
But there were a few things i wanted, one, it was too simple. And short too, you should try to make a longer one.
Keep writing...
First & foremost , I am thankful for your valuable suggestions. I will keep my conscience open while penning down the texts. Need these suggestions on regular basis to enhance my writing prowess.
Quite good!
Personally as a women,I would've liked it more if u had kept it long.
The title was good.
And I liked your simplicity. keep posting.. Looking forward for your work....
Thank you for your views. Certainly I need it for my own enhancement. Onwards I would keep texts going in rhythm. Keep eyes on me.