Hey there! Fangirl here!
This was really awesome. (no offence made for your feelings...it's definitely sad. But your poem is awesome!)
The flow was just magical... And it's like the first time in a while I've seen a rhyming poem with such an awesome flow!
Dude seriously, I don't think I need to point things cause I believe people before me already did that for you!
But still I would like to point our all the things that I like....
Rhyming is perfect
Font is good
Line breaking is just appropriate
No grammatical error... which is good
And uh the list goes on...
But anyway... I loved ur work... And uh I'm sorry for you
FD46~
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