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piyali archives Hi! Firstly, I loved your poem and everything about it. I respect my country's soldiers as they skip nights and days to keep us safe. Your poem was ...

piyali archives Hi! This poem is heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. How :( My review:- Your poem bought back all the memories of my old friends who are ...

piyali archives Hi! I don't know how to review this since it is a simple concept and no errors. It's a cute narrative about the girl and the moon, and ...

Hi! Firstly, you have written a really good start, it was not rushed. But sometimes readers get bored reading long blocks of text, so you gotta break it up. Now ...

Hi! I feel like you have described good - the feeling of losing someone. I really admired the words you put because it was something even I find hard. Because ...

Hi! Firstly, I don't know anything about the context of the poem, but I still liked and felt it. I like the mix, there are rhyming words, beautiful describing words. ...

Hi! Yes. I agree. I wholeheartedly agree >.< Maths is the subject which stresses me out more than my brother, so that's something. But the difference between you and me ...

Hi! Firstly, this is a really interesting and hooky first chapter. However, there are a few tips I would like to suggest: 1- You need to start a new paragraph ...

Hi! This is the first time I have read a poem like this - science and a form of art together. I liked that you were straight to the point. ...

Is there something which happens after it, if then I would love to read it. It felt kinda unfinished and makes it seem only as a block of description. I ...

This poetry is really nice :D This feels like something I would have written in my diary about my feelings. The words about comparing, oh I can tell you I ...

This song is beautiful. Everyone would at least have one person which this would apply to. And everyone interprets this in a different way. For me, I think, it applies ...

Hi, I like this poetry! I do find this poem attractive and meaningful. The transition of him being in the human world to him being in hell is smooth. We ...

I like this poem, my vocabulary is quivering at your words. Like "panoply", "marionette" and many more. I can't list them all. It would be like copy-pasting your poem. Overall, ...

Your poetry is so relatable. I am astonished that these are my exact feelings. I think the authors of my life are sleeping or are a bad writer to come ...