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Hello there Golden Wizard or Prakamya Shukla, however you want me to adress to you. This poem is sooo nice, I love it a lot so I will leave a cute little review for your work.
The poem opens up with a really dark and locked room. That room is full of symbols and I believe it is really important in the understanding of the character's mind and soul. It represents a dark soul, filled with remorse and sadness. The person sealed him/herself into the soul and opposed any human interaction, further enhancing that grief. The "mocking darkness" is a really cool metaphor I enjoyed. It reminds me of that voice inside one's head, that voice that mocks you, blame you, for your sins. The darkness is the support for it, working together with the loneliness.
The person is not presented as a completely destroyed human being. He/she still has hope, looks for someone to get him out of this darkness; no one comes. That results in him( I will assume it's a guy) falling into a deep slumber, one that is necessary in order for him to fully transform.
This new person, now awakened is insensible, driven by a strong revenge and hate. He already paid his bills, now God will allow him to do his thing and then come back.
Lovely poem, great insight in the mind of a criminal
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Thankyou/ Dhanyavad
Hi, I like this poetry! I do find this poem attractive and meaningful. The transition of him being in the human world to him being in hell is smooth. We can see how cold and distant the person finds the earth to be. He finds it empty and not good exactly. I don't think this person finds hell worse than the earth. Again, I liked this poem. Keep up the good work!
Thankyou for your views. I am glad to know that you like it.
Hi there! I love how absolutely spooky this is! The allusions to death and the theme of darkness all the way through really add to the entire vibe that you have going here. I think it is very Poe of you! However, the swerve away from that dark and creepy atmosphere is the idea of rebirth, and I really love that idea throughout the whole poem. It adds more depth to the spooky fall literature that we see on a daily basis! Really really good job here!
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