Young Writers Society

Hi sulamitandebirhan,

Mailice here with a short review!

The title was quite unusual and also the text developed into an interesting little arc of suspense when you reach a certain point and finally understand what exactly it is about. I thought it was a mistake at the beginning, but you can see it clearly when reading.

Apart from the title, which I really liked, I'm also a big fan of the story. I like how the tone reads in a good and rushed tone, like it's just a matter of time to get there and solve the problem. It also made me feel at times as if the text was something like a message on WhatsApp or the like because it is written in that tone. The few abbreviations you insert also help immensely to make it seem like such an online message. The humorous aspect is always there and you notice it from the first moment.

One minor problem I've seen is punctuation and grammar in general. Sometimes it seems as if you wrote the story within a few minutes, which means that some mistakes have accumulated. It really disturbs the flow of the reading. I would recommend that once you have written something, you put it aside for a while until you publish it, and then read it through again so that you can find the mistakes with a clear head. Otherwise, it shows a bit of a rush, which is rather negative for the reader.

One small point I would like to make: as soon as you show that this is about "Math", I would write it in capital letters, because it is a "name" that you are presenting here.

Otherwise, it was a funny, short story.

Have fun writing!

Mailice

Ok wow! I am laughing so hard. I am assuming that the weird grammar and punctuation is on purpose and really makes it seem like you are rebelling against math even a little bit by doing that. This is funny. Good Job. I especially like the part where you bring up the fact that no one even uses a lot of the math subjects in days to day life. And yes I am writing this review to procrastinate doing my homework. ;-;

Hi!
Yes. I agree. I wholeheartedly agree >.<
Maths is the subject which stresses me out more than my brother, so that's something. But the difference between you and me is that I don't even try dude. I don't even know wth is going on in my maths class rn. Watch my study late at night lmao.
And you are right. She dead to me -_-
That was my feeling. And in grammar, there are only a few mistakes, like capitalization of "I"

Thanks!

Ps: Can I accompany you to the grave? I would gladly do.