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Hi, Pineapple here for a review! I really loved this problem. It kind of reminds me of an anthem or a pledge that a group says together. I don't know ...

Hi, Ruthie4u! Wow...this was great. It perfectly paints the feeling of falling in love and realizing the person isn't enough. I loved how you described "him". What he did for ...

Hi, nightshadows! I really liked this poem. I liked how you made only the second and fourth lines rhyme. It gave it a bit of consistency so it wasn't choppy. ...

This...was just amazing. It was so creative. I loved the inconsistent rhythm of it. That seemed to make the poem super fun and interesting to read. The last line "who ...

Hi, BlueGlow! Wow...this was a great poem. You really illustrated what it's like to be stuck in your mind. You brought light to the good part and the negative parts ...

Hi, Liminality! I really liked this poem! It was very creative and interesting to read. I liked how you seemed to bring light to supporting characters. I feel like they ...

Hi, LizzyTyler, I'm here for a little review! First, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I especially loved how the beginning stanza was about the sunrise and the very last ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! Wow, I thought this was a really smart idea. The poem was so dramatic and could make the reader think. Who knew that ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a review! Wow, this was an amazing poem. I liked the metaphorical part of it. The way you used falling from a tightrope to illustrate falling ...

Hey, Pineapple here for a little review! I absolutely loved this poem. The way you painted a clear picture of what it is like to be 13. Being 13 is ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a review! I really enjoyed reading your poem. I liked how you took a sort of a metaphorical route with this poem. It was symbolic, too. ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was short and sweet. I like how you guys seem to question silence throughout the whole ...

Hi there! I really liked your poem/story. I honestly think it was more of a story even though it had a poem in it. I enjoyed reading it. The imagery ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! Wow, both of you are very talented writers. You should really be proud of what you created. Your similies are spot on and ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review. Wow, this was a great short story! It was emotional and realistic. The imagery and description you used were fantastic. I could relate ...