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Cool poem! I would like to tell you a couple tips for improving this grammatically, and wording-wise. The first quick thing is that all lines of a poem should be ...

Cool poem! When I read the last line my draw fell open XD. The poem is almost not deep and scattered about before you read the last line, but the ...

Wow. At first I thought I was getting where what you meant, but as usually happens with poems, it took a turn and I had to try harder to understand ...

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I only read a couple paragraphs, and I don't have time to read more, but since I haven't yet read the previous chapters, I think I'm going to start from ...

I just have a couple things here. I do enjoy this poem, but there are a couple tips I have. At "Your arm rounds around me," it just doesn't flow ...

I really like this poem. I think many will be able to relate to it. I also like your rhythm and rhyme in this poem. I think the metaphors are ...

Ummm... Bob was never bit. If he was, the group would know. They wouldn't have been so cheery and drinking champagne and having a great time together. Also, they would ...

First, I want to say that I really like this poem. If I'm interpreting it right, it's extremely relatable. And I love all the metaphors and rhyming. I have a ...

This poem is really cool! I love how you used words that normally have 'snow' in them and instead put sun. It makes it really interesting. The last line is ...

I'm kind of in a rush, so I apologize for the short review. One main thing is that every single line of a poem needs to be capitalized, even if ...

Wow. This is such a powerful poem. It's really awesome. It really deserves to be on the front page. In my opinion, it's kind of a hard poem to understand ...

First, I really love this poem. I do have some grammar corrections, though. In "It's soft, mushy, and some what grey," some what should be one word. In "It can ...

Iron Novelist, one thing that I love about the classic poets' poetry (Robert Frost, Robert Browning, Emily Dickinson, Christina Rossetti, and many more) is the wording. They all lived in ...

I really like how I can sense your frustration through this. It's very cool how you express your feelings. It's cool how you used an onomatopoeia with the "st-st-stutter." It's ...

I really enjoyed this poem. Length doesn't usually matter, and I think this is an example of that. You got your point across very well in these five lines. I ...