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Mega appreciated? Seems worth it. :) Hi Lupin~ Honestly, this was quite different that most of the other poetry I've been subject to on this site. But, the first thing ...

Hi Tigerlilly!

Hi Rit~ You are quite a natural at poetry! I see you've been here for less than a month, and whenever I look at the featured list, one of your ...

Hi again! I have serious review motivation much that it's weird. But anyway. Your poems just make me happy. There's something about them; I think it's the rhyming and the ...

Hey Pomp~ First, I'm slightly confused regarding what the poem is about. So I guess this poem could be one of three things: a truly wonderfully written compilation of enigmas, ...

Hi Joy! You must be thrilled with this piece. It's beautiful. For the most part, you've really done a wonderful job with the rhyming pattern. The only mistake I see ...

Hi Deanie! I haven't reviewed in a while, so I'm kinda outa practice. But here it goes. I'm not a big Nicki Minaj fan to be honest, but I am ...

Hey Deanie, This is beautiful, first of all. It really captures the naivety of childhood friendship in a nutshell. I'll touch on a few inconsistencies with flow in the first ...

Hey Purnima, This will be a short review, since there's not much for you to fix. The rhythm flows nicely in the poem, and the ideas expressed through your words ...

Hey Weymouth This was so wonderful. So completely wonderful. Gosh. Wow, okay. Getting myself together. I know it sucks, but I'll have to start with a few nitpicky things. There ...

Hey! Wow, this was beautiful. I'll review for you. :) First of all, as I read this, the main thing I, as the reader, immediately came to love is the ...

Hey Philip, So, I haven't been on this site for a while, true story, I hate to admit. But I went on and saw you were following me, which was ...

Hey magpie! First of all, all of the metaphors in this poem are perfect. I especially liked, "...slink like jaguars" and "...waddle like waterfowl". But anyways, onto the review. So ...

Hey Silver. Whoa. This was pretty intense. And judging by my surprise, I'm not as well accustomed to the harsh and unfortunate realities of society as poor Dane is. Okay, ...

Hi TheBlackSheep. This was beautiful and touching, and I promise I will be careful with this; I just have a few suggestions. "Lay me down on a bed of moss ...