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Hey Iron[man]~ A'right. The idea that you were trying to portray here was pretty cool. I really enjoyed the reference you made to Alice and Wonderland when you discussed the ...

Hey Dreamwalker~ WHOA. I love your poetry. I've read the most previous poems you've posted, and then a couple days later I ended up coming across the spoken word versions ...

Hey Deanie! I haven't done any reviews yet, but I guess it's better late than never. ;) Link our loosened arms; Enlighten our troubled nights with palpable faith. I would ...

Hey Aidan!~ Sorry it took so long for me to get here and review your first chapter; school's been taking up a lot of my time lately. I'll go ahead ...

Hey Deanie~ Again, I know. :) The format that this poem is in (using the second line in each stanza as the first line in the next, and using the ...

Hi Lajnsuik~ First of all, welcome to YWS! I really liked this. This work really portrayed the tendency of people in today's society to mask their natural qualities in order ...

Hi J, here as promised~ You had a pretty good vocabulary at ten years old, and a very mature mindset. Not a lot of kids, especially that young, really have ...

You typed this on your phone? WHOA, especially while you're walking??!! That's impressive. Props for that, man. Well, hello impressive person that can type on tiny keys while walking~ The ...

Incredible appreciation? It just keeps getting better. :) Hi Lupin~ This was rather genius. I have nothing much to criticize, to be honest, so I'll shower you with compliments for ...

Hey Deanie~ This was clever; I loved the metaphor of the shoes, and then the rocky path to symbolize the relationship! I've never seen something done in this way before. ...

Hi Maggie (love your name, by the way)~ The theme you've used here throughout your poem—the idea that one cannot change their past or undo what has been done, and ...

Hey Andrew~ This was very enjoyable to read—almost like a lullaby. Your vocabulary usage is outstanding! I commend you on this, as well as keeping the same general theme throughout ...

Hey Books~ I love piano, so this review may be slightly biased ;), but I'll try the best I can to ignore the part of me that wants to fall ...

Hey Flash~ This was strange and cryptically beautiful. Your poem reminds me of "The Time Machine" by H.G. Wells. I don't know if you've read it, but it's about an ...

Hey Authorian~ This reminded me of when teachers tell kids not to throw paper airplanes because they'll poke somebody's eye out. xD It's disturbing that anyone would think that to ...