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Hey there. John here to review your poem. Now, you requested me to review your rondeau, but as I sent in a PM to you-- I'll do that later. Let's ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem! Let me just start by saying how much I love this. This is beautiful, this is concise, this is a special kind ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem! I really love this. I love your tone and I love this refrain of "paper girl". Mainly in this review, I'll be ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem! Let's get right into it. I really like this idea and your personification of idea and anxiety. You did an action sequence ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem! Let's get right into it. I really like this narrative arc. It's a rare skill in a poet to be able to ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem! Let's get right to it, shall we? This is great. I love your imagery here, and how it's introduced right from the ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem. Before we get started, a sentence of two of introduction-- I'm a trans person and I very much appreciate your effort ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem. Let's get right into it. I think this is an intriguing piece of writing, and I very much liked the story behind ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem. First of all, this is amazing. Seriously. I told you during the jam that yours was one of my favorite poems written ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem! Let's get right into it, shall we? I think this is a really good foundation for a dark poem. I very ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem. Let's get right into it. I think the image you painted here is really vivid, and you don't need any basic ...

Hey there. Jonathan here to review your poem. I really love this. You have this really haunting tone that kept me engaged-- and honestly a little scared ;)-- throughout the ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem! Let's get right to it. I love the story you're telling here. I know how hard it is to create a ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem. Let's get right into it. It's really rare that I love the execution of a poem like this. Generally, structure can ...

Hey there. I'm Jonathan, here to review your poem. Since this is pretty short, I'll try not to be long-winded. I'll just jump right in to what I love about ...