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Alright, so I just came from reading another poem of yours, thought I'd see what else you got =P I like this one better than the other one I just ...

Ah, you have the ever-popular Hendrix quote in your sig, God ;) Anyways, on to your poem: Wandering, Wandering I agree with Suzanne about the repetition. I just don't think ...

Maybe it's a dream...or maybe it's a nightmare I don't no how to take it in It's hard to see the ones I hold near slip away Do you no ...

i'm alone and i don't want to be. [so what are you gonna do about it?] i hate it. i'm alone and i want to go home. [well that's nice ...

Hmmm... I just read another one of your poems, and I liked your other one better. This seems a little...grade school. Let me elaborate: in school you learn how to ...

I read poetry because I write poetry, and I write poetry because I read it. Basically poetry itself is like a whole separate emotion, and it's nice sometimes to find ...

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This has RHYME SCHEME written all over it. When writing a rhyming poem that should never be the case. The rhyme needs to sort of sneak up on you, and ...

The poem was cliche and original but not half bad try to work on grammar and punctionuation I think you meant "punctuation"? And how could it be both original and ...

I look at my reflection in the mirror and it weeps though I do not.

My brother has a gun I don't know why He sais its for protection I know he is lieing I went to school one morning Thinking it was a regular ...

didn't make any sense. What did the beers thing at the end have anything to do with sunrises in the east and changing friendships? My favorite lines were the first ...

I don't think I can take another lie. I'm filled to the brim and Spilling. Over.

Unwilling to leave, Yet unable to stay. This is the predicament, I find myself in today.