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Hello, I'm Sandman. First off, don't be sorry that this is depressing. There is a lot of things that are considered depressing so don't be sorry for that. It is ...

Hello I’m Sandman and, I’ll be your Reviewer today. First off I love the title it just doesn’t go with the poem, find something else that it would suite. I ...

Hello I’m Sandman and, I’ll be your Reviewer today. First of all, I love it is well written and, obviously well thought out. I hope you make more things like ...

Hello, I’m Sandman and, I’ll be your Reviewer toady. First of all, I love this poem. It is a very well written poem. It is a good poem about losing ...

Hello I'm Sandman. Okay, let's start. This chapter is pretty good. It is well written and displays a clear style. There are a few things that I did notice while ...

This is great, dark and, melancholy. This is something most everyone can relate to.... (so can I) It gives a sense of the darkness that can grow within someone. It ...

I love it. This is an amazing poem that is very true that anyone in the Trans community would love. I think you did great on this poem. There really ...

The plot is good and it's a great poem but, it seems more like a romantic poem rather than a spiritual poem. I will not lie this poem does have ...

I don't think that this was a bad short story. It could be better and improved. I just didn't really understand why you skipped down and use the parenthesis when ...

I found a couple things wrong with this story. " Two or three shots used to help me but now they not." You should have don't instead of not so ...

This is a woebegone poem and takes something very somber and puts in the light. The power of suicide is devastating and you make sure that everyone who reads this ...

This is an amazing poem. How did you come up with it? I've pondered the thought of what happens to us after death but, I've never thought of it like ...

Grrrreeeeaaaaattt.... I loved it. You put us in a magical place with this piece. It takes us to a whole different world or plain of existence if you will. The ...

Okay... So that was interesting and I loved it. I love how you compare them to a sword. It makes sense that you're saying that their heart is great but ...

You need to slow down just a little because there is so much happening that I can't keep up. It feels like you are trying to rush the story but ...