It's a lovely thing
To think about existing.
You fill a minute void with vascular bundles and raw thoughts, releasing your small influences out onto a home of molecules.
You project your voice only to have it echo away like melting ice, feeling it grow warm and malleable in your waiting hands.
Sometimes it's quite nice to remember you won't dent the Earth when you disappear.
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First of all, I love it is well written and, obviously well thought out. I hope you make more things like this. I think that you portrayed how most kids feel today, lost and suicidal, that is an amazing thing that you’ve done. It is something that needs to be talked about a lot more than it is. I hope that you will make it far in the writing industry. I love this poem and hope that you do more like it. Have a good Review day.
Wow. Okay, so I love this. I think this has to be my favorite thing I've read so far. It's so true. And I find this very interesting. Please don't stop writing. I know this is a very short review, (sorry) but wow. Heh, I like it a lot is what I'm trying to say I guess. Great Job. It's really fascinating. I really hope at some point you would like to Co-write something. If so, please contact me! I'd love to co-write with you! You're really good! Please, oh please, keep writing!