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I had to read this a few times, both ways, to really be able to get it. Now I feel like crying. So I logged on especially to comment and ...

Wow... I wasn't entirely certain what I thought about this piece until the finishing lines. The last line especially sort of tied the knot in my mind and made it ...

I LOVE THIS!!! I've never thought about it this way... It was really original! The rhyme scheme is perfect! It's such a cute little thing! Well done! It's not much ...

Alright, so I'm going to be of absolutely no use to you and just keep rambling on and on about how much I love this. I think, with all honestly, ...

I really like this! The first two lines were my favorite, because of the imageries. I even clicked like! The one thing that bugs me, is the ending. "Doing what ...

This was good! I felt a lot of things while reading this piece... In the end, though, I was somewhat... scared. I don't know why exactly - for some reason, ...

I just wanted to tell you how much I love this. I love how you insert random bits - they are the best! Like the whole handstand thing. I love ...

I agree with theCodex about the "you can never be done" sounding a bit awkward, so you might want to consider changing that one - but other than that, I ...

Love it, love it, love it!!! It was so funny (and true)! Good job with this one. You definitely made a laugh out of something that's daily and\or annoying. I ...

I love this! It was so pure... I felt like I was looking at this poem, or maybe even the girl speaking, through clear and cold spring water - you ...

Beautiful! Very nice imagery! I admit, I didn't understand the italics at first, but then I read the first spoiler and re-read them - and it was breath taking. It ...

I love this! You did great!!! It's very hard to write about bullying, but you portrayed the emotions very clearly - you did very well there. I love your characters ...

Hi there! This exercise is harder than it looks, isn't it? Good job! I'm here to review :) My comments will be in red and the parts that I am ...

I love this! The only thing I didn't like very much was the first four lines, they felt very familiar and cliche. They were intruiging, but something about them didn't ...

I just wanted to say that you used this writing style very well! The plot was very interesting and I had a very enjoyable read. You did good! I can't ...