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I, for one, am glad you included the author's note. I remember when this happened! It really hit home, and I am both excited and sobered by the reminder of ...

Hi, CrimsonAngel!! Welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this piece due to the real emotion present and the perspective that it gave me. As somebody who has never had to ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this!! I think it really speaks to your writing abilities that your audience can enjoy prose that is not necessarily in story form (in an extremely ...

I love this! Your poetry is beautiful, TheSilverFox, and I just love this poem. It's just so personal to you, which almost keeps me out from understanding it, but in ...

Oh, Catlover211! This was a beautiful poem and a beautiful expression of feelings! The best part of a poem is its effect on the reader, and boy, did this leave ...

The great thing about poetry is its lack of format and it's ability to be molded any way the author would like in order to convey the point they would ...

In this work, I like how it starts by showing the reader the the situation the speaker is being put into. I also like how the speaker begins to go ...

I love this. So much. This is so full of raw emotion. This is how I would imagine a parent talking to a child after their own death, in the ...

I like the effect that having no punctuation has. It's really cool and adds to the voice! I also like how this poem flows. It's almost like the poem is ...

I like the thought behind this a lot. It seems a little scatter-brained, but I'm guessing that the main character is feeling really scatter-brained, as well. The voice just helps ...

I like the story here. There are some minor errors in her, such as the word "waste" in stead of the word "waist." Also, when doing the cutoff of the ...

I like the ideas expressed in this poem, a lot. It sums up many problems that the church has. The fashion in which it was given, as well, was quite ...

The material is really raw and comes from the heart. I really do love this piece, especially the part about showing weakness through tears.The blunt feelings one gets is really ...

Not gonna lie, I like this piece a lot! However, there are still many grammatical errors. Please-the world begs this of you-use "it's" and "its" in the correct manners. "It's" ...

Cheesy? No, never. Romance (at least REAL romance) is never cheesy. Everybody feels it differently, and yet they feel it the same. Some never manage to feel it at all. ...