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This is a rather dandy poem! :) Of course, it's a tad sad, but alot of poems are, thus, when they get to you, you understand that it's written very ...

Bonjourno!~ Overlooking your poem its okay, but theres one major issue with it. The whole poem doesn't have a scrap of rhythm, and reading in your head, even out aloud, ...

If this is not yours... I dont advise you post it on here. It is not your own work. Thus, its note really allowed. Unless it is yours, then tell ...

:) Just saying that if its a song, they're is a section for it, its lyrics at the bottom of the forum index. Welcome to YWS! This is rather good, ...

:) This a brilliant and snappy portrayle of suicide, which most people always go on to describe their rubbish lives and how they are sad about doing it, but the ...

Im sorry, but in my time on YWS, this is possibly the least gripping or intresting poem i've read. It looks like it took you a minute or two to ...

Hi, Tim! :D I read through your poem, and I can certianly relate to the whole issue, as I do have... -cough- problems -cough- so this does make you put ...

Bonjourno, Sage! :) Welcome to YWS, and congratulations on posting your first piece! This poem is really good, usually im not a real big fan of using a continous line ...

This is a really pleasent poem and it truely makes you think about past relationships! I was talking to my friend next to me while reading it, and it totally ...

This is a really creative poem, I love the the parting of the lines, it reminds me a little of 'WE ARE SPARTA!" :lol: I dunno why! We jump in ...

I'll call you lily :xd: Anywho, this is a fairly decent poem, but the decent level is what you'd find on a sort of birthday card, just a very depressing ...

1) If I painted a picture of your heart (, needed here) it would be so blue (tell us what this signifies.) but I would already know that ( , ...

This is a really good poem! :D My favourite poem out of the ones you have done. :) Yet theres a two lines that sound a bit iffy :/ But ...

Really good poem! I see the way you've structured it, you're trying to make one continuous paragraph instead of breaking it down, which is really good, yet, not so well ...

Nice little poem you've got here, but it kinda dies half way through :/ She is alone, Although she is not She is unknown Though no one has forgot The ...