nightmarebook13

i wasnt trying to be honest. its not only about me but im a leader or a gsa at my school so its something thats important to me. thank you ...

its actually up to tthe reader interpertation, but it was about a girl and her sexuality. something that one of my friends is struggling with very badly and i just ...

Thank you very much! The reviews helped out alot and I wrote this one about a year ago, and just wanted to throw it up for grabs to see if ...

tell me your in a band. because i want to hear this recorded.

ahola! the vague-ness allows you to apply it to your own life. --- but i want to know what happend to her to make her feel this way or is ...

Watch the grammar and rhyming. Needs work, but I think that if you worked a little more on the screaming part you might have a head-liner on Taste of Chaos. ...

its okay ... as said before don't put it up here if you don't want it looked at!!! :D but it was good and i have had some of the ...

watch your spelling and grammar but for the most part it was pretty good :elephant:

no i hadn't planned to b/c threw the chapters i will go very in depth w/ the personialitys and other characters...... i plan on it being very exciting and plot ...

*tear* :cry:

i liked it . but I'm not quite sure if the was suppose to be a rhyme scheme . otherwise i think it was great! :elephant: keep rockin!!

Sorry for the mistake I made earlier! I have it all written down in a notebook copied the wrong title , I re-wrote what I had onto here. :)

I like alot of your stuff, and this just topped it all off!!! AWESOME! The only thing I have to say is make it longer so I can read more ...

depressing bit much? i just hope that not how you really feel that was pretty strong! :shock:

sorry didnt mean to put that in there twice! :cry: