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used

by shar_shar_says_rawr


You hated me from the start

Just tell me

And leave me in the dark

I thought we were best friends from the start

But you used me to get what you want

Friends or enemies it's confusing to tell

But I think I found out not too long ago

I already know, no need to yell it in my face

I’ve been told too many times

Its just gonna leave tears down my face



Who ever thought kids would be so harsh

And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what

You rubbed it in my face

And my heart got beaten up

You used me and bruised me

And I’ll never suck it up



I know I’m different who gives a f***

I wanna hate but I still wanna love

You left me behind way too many times

You can no longer knock me down I’m already on the ground

You’re such a liar

A person no one will trust

I wish your friends will just turn you down

And leave you to here to cry

And no one will be there to help dry your eyes



Who ever thought kids would be so harsh

And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what

You rubbed it in my face

And my heart got beaten up

You used me and bruised me

And I’ll never suck it up



I don’t lie like you do

These words came from the heart

It feels good to let these feeling out

Cuz my back that you stabbed was backed up with my real friends

The ones that you tried to take from me

And screw mess my whole life up



Who ever thought kids would be so harsh

And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what

You rubbed it in my face

And my heart got beaten up

You used me and bruised me

And I’ll never suck it up



I feel good and bad

But more triumph

Than the shame that makes me feel guilty

But today I feel pleased

Just to tell you these words came straight from the heart







(The one that you gave marks of black and blue

Till it cut into 2

The one you used like a toy

The toys that little boy threw until they broke into shattered pieces

Like the glass antiques in their grandmother’s house

The antiques that they would accidentally step in to cause them to bleed and cry until someone came to save their lives!

Lets face it you never liked me from the start!

So just go and leave me in the dark!

I ‘d rather be left alone just go away and don’t worry I’ll never let this feeling go!

And these feelings will haunt you until you die like the millions of lives that wander through my mind!)


AUTHORS NOTE: the wording in () for this song is screamo.


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Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:04 am
Squall says...



The rhyming in this needs some work. Otherwise, the lyrics seem very appropiate for this song.

Good work.




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Tue Aug 14, 2007 5:29 pm
nightmarebook13 says...



Watch the grammar and rhyming. Needs work, but I think that if you worked a little more on the screaming part you might have a head-liner on Taste of Chaos. Otherwise put a guitar, amp, and drums to it and your good! =)





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