The rhyming in this needs some work. Otherwise, the lyrics seem very appropiate for this song.
Good work.
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You hated me from the start
Just tell me
And leave me in the dark
I thought we were best friends from the start
But you used me to get what you want
Friends or enemies it's confusing to tell
But I think I found out not too long ago
I already know, no need to yell it in my face
I’ve been told too many times
Its just gonna leave tears down my face
Who ever thought kids would be so harsh
And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what
You rubbed it in my face
And my heart got beaten up
You used me and bruised me
And I’ll never suck it up
I know I’m different who gives a f***
I wanna hate but I still wanna love
You left me behind way too many times
You can no longer knock me down I’m already on the ground
You’re such a liar
A person no one will trust
I wish your friends will just turn you down
And leave you to here to cry
And no one will be there to help dry your eyes
Who ever thought kids would be so harsh
And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what
You rubbed it in my face
And my heart got beaten up
You used me and bruised me
And I’ll never suck it up
I don’t lie like you do
These words came from the heart
It feels good to let these feeling out
Cuz my back that you stabbed was backed up with my real friends
The ones that you tried to take from me
And screw mess my whole life up
Who ever thought kids would be so harsh
And they’ll always hate different cliques no matter what
You rubbed it in my face
And my heart got beaten up
You used me and bruised me
And I’ll never suck it up
I feel good and bad
But more triumph
Than the shame that makes me feel guilty
But today I feel pleased
Just to tell you these words came straight from the heart
(The one that you gave marks of black and blue
Till it cut into 2
The one you used like a toy
The toys that little boy threw until they broke into shattered pieces
Like the glass antiques in their grandmother’s house
The antiques that they would accidentally step in to cause them to bleed and cry until someone came to save their lives!
Lets face it you never liked me from the start!
So just go and leave me in the dark!
I ‘d rather be left alone just go away and don’t worry I’ll never let this feeling go!
And these feelings will haunt you until you die like the millions of lives that wander through my mind!)
AUTHORS NOTE: the wording in () for this song is screamo.
The rhyming in this needs some work. Otherwise, the lyrics seem very appropiate for this song.
Good work.
Watch the grammar and rhyming. Needs work, but I think that if you worked a little more on the screaming part you might have a head-liner on Taste of Chaos. Otherwise put a guitar, amp, and drums to it and your good! =)
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