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Re: Muluth - Part 8 of SMSU Poetry
Hello! I'm going to leave this review short though hopefully it'll give you some quality feedback! Let's get into it. ;) First thing a wanted to suggest, though it is ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: My Feline Friend
Hello! I keep seeing your works all over the green room and site in general, so I thought I'd help clear out the green room and give this piece a ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 21.1
Hey Querencia! I’ll be reviewing this chapter for you today. As much I don’t want to jump right into a novel 20 chapters in, this has been sitting in the ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: heartquakes
Hey marms! I've read several of your poems and I'm a huge fan, so I thought I'd stop in for a quick review. Let's hope my input helps to improve ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: Dearest Cassandra
Hello Ella! I’m here to review yet another one of your poems! Let’s get into it. I see you used ‘Dearest Cassandra’ as the starting line in the two stanzas, ...
Jan 13, 2018 -
Re: Life
Hey there Steggy! This is no longer in the green room but I thought I'd review it anyway, especially since it is something everyone can relate to! Since this poem ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: Blake And Emma Chapter Two
Hello! I haven't read the previous chapter and this is only the second to the novel, so I thought I'd might as well review it. Based on this chapter, I'm ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: The Skeleton (Corsets and Regrets)
Hello there, Ella! When I first read this I wasn't sure if I wanted to review it. Then I looked back at it and decided 'why not'? Hopefully you will ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: empty soul, empty mind
Hey there! I'll be reviewing this piece today. Though it's not in the green room, it looks like it could use more feedback, so here I am! Let's get into ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Certain Life - Chapter 2 [Macy]
Hey Steggy! Finally have the time to review this -- sorry I've been so busy. Anyway, let's get on to the review. I found multiple grammar mistakes throughout the chapter ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: Kidnapping Case #402
Hello! I'll be reviewing this today, seeing as I have some spare time on my hands. I was immediately intrigued by the title. Kidnapping? Oooh. I haven't read the mystery ...
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: Me closest to the farthest You
Hello! I'll be reviewing your work today, seeing as I have spare time and the green room is looking a little full, huh? Let's get right into it! We hit ...
Jan 7, 2018 -
Re: I Stay Here
Hello! I’ll be reviewing your poem today. I’m writing this on my phone so apologies if there are typos, haha. Without further ado, let’s get on to the review! My ...
Jan 6, 2018 -
Re: Certain Life - Chapter 1 [Rhett]
Hello again Steggy! Let’s get into the review. :3 I’m so pumped! Already things are happening. Not to mention, Rhett. Rhett . What a beautiful name. My nerdy self decided ...
Jan 6, 2018 -
Re: Certain Life - Prologue
Hey Steggy. I’ll be reviewing this piece for you today! Hopefully you’ll find it helpful in the slightest bit. When I first skimmed my eyes over the body of this, ...
Jan 5, 2018
