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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Muluth - Part 8 of SMSU Poetry

    Hello! I'm going to leave this review short though hopefully it'll give you some quality feedback! Let's get into it. ;) First thing a wanted to suggest, though it is ...

    Jan 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Feline Friend

    Hello! I keep seeing your works all over the green room and site in general, so I thought I'd help clear out the green room and give this piece a ...

    Jan 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 21.1

    Hey Querencia! I’ll be reviewing this chapter for you today. As much I don’t want to jump right into a novel 20 chapters in, this has been sitting in the ...

    Jan 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: heartquakes

    Hey marms! I've read several of your poems and I'm a huge fan, so I thought I'd stop in for a quick review. Let's hope my input helps to improve ...

    Jan 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dearest Cassandra

    Hello Ella! I’m here to review yet another one of your poems! Let’s get into it. I see you used ‘Dearest Cassandra’ as the starting line in the two stanzas, ...

    Jan 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life

    Hey there Steggy! This is no longer in the green room but I thought I'd review it anyway, especially since it is something everyone can relate to! Since this poem ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Blake And Emma Chapter Two

    Hello! I haven't read the previous chapter and this is only the second to the novel, so I thought I'd might as well review it. Based on this chapter, I'm ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Skeleton (Corsets and Regrets)

    Hello there, Ella! When I first read this I wasn't sure if I wanted to review it. Then I looked back at it and decided 'why not'? Hopefully you will ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: empty soul, empty mind

    Hey there! I'll be reviewing this piece today. Though it's not in the green room, it looks like it could use more feedback, so here I am! Let's get into ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Certain Life - Chapter 2 [Macy]

    Hey Steggy! Finally have the time to review this -- sorry I've been so busy. Anyway, let's get on to the review. I found multiple grammar mistakes throughout the chapter ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Kidnapping Case #402

    Hello! I'll be reviewing this today, seeing as I have some spare time on my hands. I was immediately intrigued by the title. Kidnapping? Oooh. I haven't read the mystery ...

    Jan 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Me closest to the farthest You

    Hello! I'll be reviewing your work today, seeing as I have spare time and the green room is looking a little full, huh? Let's get right into it! We hit ...

    Jan 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Stay Here

    Hello! I’ll be reviewing your poem today. I’m writing this on my phone so apologies if there are typos, haha. Without further ado, let’s get on to the review! My ...

    Jan 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Dramatic Re: Certain Life - Chapter 1 [Rhett]

    Hello again Steggy! Let’s get into the review. :3 I’m so pumped! Already things are happening. Not to mention, Rhett. Rhett . What a beautiful name. My nerdy self decided ...

    Jan 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Dramatic Re: Certain Life - Prologue

    Hey Steggy. I’ll be reviewing this piece for you today! Hopefully you’ll find it helpful in the slightest bit. When I first skimmed my eyes over the body of this, ...

    Jan 5, 2018


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