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I was impressed with your introduction. It made me understand what your essay is all about. :) You also did a good title. :) "Becoming a teenager you will feel ...

"Our life should not be control by the modern technology. Because our life depends on us, even there’s a problem we don’t need to give up and just rely on ...

I agree with you that technology surrounds us nowadays, and it influenced everyone of us.Technology aids us to new discoveries . Regarding your essay, you did well in constructing your ...

Such a good writer! You did great with your hook. You have a very informative work. The flow of the piece is very smooth. It is obviously seen that you ...

You have a good title for your essay. But you have some corrections on your work such as missing words, repeating the same word again and again, and the right ...

I agree that technology has already been a big part on our lives already. And we all know that technology is everywhere, because technology is always present in different fields. ...

I agree with your point that technology though beneficial to humans, must be used wisely. Watch out with the use of your possessive noun. Remember that putting an apostrophe+s must ...

I can understand what is your point of view bout your essay. Just watch out for your grammar and the proper choice of words. If you think you are repeating ...

I did not find any difficulty in understanding your work. I want to give a compliment for that. Your transition of ideas is well-systematized. Just be careful with your spelling ...

I agree with your idea that technology gives improvement on education and on communication. With the aid of technology, our work as a student is now easier because of its ...

Reading this article made me realize how helpful the technology is. Now that technology is all around us, I can conclude that technology will have no limit for its improvement.

this article exposed the advantages of also showcased the importance of technology into our lives. Comparing to our past way of working,there is a great improvement at present

I strongly agree with you. Technology brought a big change in our way of living. And now that it is continuously improving, we are already depending on it.

A worth reading work. Technology became a part of the innovation in our lives. It's development had transformed the way of living in each of us. It is of this ...