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Hey there Juleza, Myjaspercat here to review your piece ~Blood curdling screams coming from nowhere, a horrible beast feeding on humans, and my world turning into an endless pool of ...

Hey there GinaERufo, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review The man leaned against the hard wood of the bar, the brim of his hat low and hiding his features. ...

Hey there Adolia1998, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Carla sat properly in the waiting room. How does someone sit "properly?" I mean, is it proper ...

Hey there K1553, Myjaspercat here to review your piece While idle fingers may not sow the devil’s seeds, Hmm, maybe you accidently placed the 'not' in this sentence, but if ...

Hey there JustALittleBarry, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. I continue to struggle with the feelings of the girl in my mirror, as she can’t seem to find relief ...

Hey there Goldenfox101, Myjaspercat here to review this piece for you LINE-BY-LINE/NIT-PICKS: Since you posted two chapters in one [which I would advise against this in the future] and they're ...

Hey there GinaERufo, I'm back to review this next chapter for you The 1st of July, 1946 Carrie-Ann Walsh dropped to her knees and prayed. She knelt on the hard, ...

hey there sj7445417, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave a reveiw She sat there on the shore , panting and sobbing comma gazing into the never-ending sea besides her ...

Hey there Ronnimusette, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave a review Slowly drowning, only you can save me... I think a period here would suffice Fire is a feeling, ...

Hey there GinaERufo, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave you a review LINE-BY-LINE/NIT-PICKS: The crisp white walls of the Eden Hill Medical Center seemed endless and as nauseating as ...

Hey there MissGangamash, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Nit-picks/Line-by-line Being woken from vampire sleep is like being punched in the head by an iron fist. It has only ...

Hey there Ekk15, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Nit-picks Hello, dear friend, I would take out the first comma. I am writing to you tonight rather than speaking ...

Hey there Edelweiss, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review When I first met you I didn’t know you’d leave me feeling like this. I guess I didn’t know myself ...

Hey there Notyou21, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review I stood on the cliff in solitude, No one in my sight. A peaceful feeling came over me, And filled ...

Hey there EllaXaaa, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave you a review I watch people breathe  Period To understand the purpose Inhale a breath Exhale the next  Period The ...