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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Envy

    This poem is so beautiful. I can really feel how you felt about her. It just reminds me on how I felt about this guy even though he didn't feel ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Sick Day

    I really enjoyed this poem. I really admired the detail you put in it. I also enjoyed how you did not put a rhyme scheme and that it was free ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Moments

    This poem was so cute! I loved it so much! It made me relate back with my boyfriend. I really enjoy the rhyme scheme because it kept the poem flowing. ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: This Girl

    I liked this poem. This poem is very realistic and had emotion to it. While I was reading it reminded me of me in a way. I only have 1 ...

    Aug 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Theatre, Romantic Re: To Someone I Have Not Yet Met

    i enjoyed this poem. I thought it had a lot of emotion and I could understand it completely. I am actually happy that you wrote this is a sonnet format. ...

    Aug 23, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Soul of Fame

    I love this poem. I love it because it actually shows what fame is like. It expresses the good and bad of what fame is. It tells how fame betrays ...

    Aug 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Once

    I really enjoyed this poem. You could actually feel the emotion that was put inside it. My favorite stanza from this poem was the last one. I liked that one ...

    Aug 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: A Whispered Lullaby

    I loved your personification of the sun and of the soul. It was like the poem was setting a scene and that the scene wasn't even starting to take form. ...

    Aug 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: The Place I Love

    I think this poem has a lot of emotion inside of it which I love. It is like you can feel this emotion in many ways and it lightens your ...

    Aug 8, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: mo(u)rning

    I enjoyed your sense of detail in the story. I also think that if you wanted to you can actually make this poem into a short story. I liked that ...

    Aug 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: Laugh-Lines

    I really like your poem. When it talked about the forehead, I completely understood it. I especially like that your poem does not talk about the good things of getting ...

    Aug 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The First Time

    I really liked your poem. In your poem I could really feel the emotion that was in it in real life. I also liked you rhyme which which had made ...

    Jul 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Cinderella

    Sorry to tell you but, I didn't really enjoy it. I couldn't really understand the message you were trying to put in the poem. I also think you should have ...

    Jul 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Ghosts: Chapter 1

    I liked how the story is really creative.I think that you should you don't in info thta doesn't connect to the story. I also liked the usage of detail. I ...

    Jul 12, 2012


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