When we talk ,
flowers grow in my insides.
When we hug,
my skin wants to melt down.
When we kiss,
your lips taste better than orange juice.
When you hold my hand,
it belongs only to you.
And I truly wish those moments
would last to eternity.
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great work . i loved it . it's so short and sweet . the emotions and the rhyming scheme is really good . i can totally relate to this poem . one thing to remember punctuation that's all that's missing in your poem . it's a really cute poem . would love to read more of your works . your poem really made my day
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keep up the good work
This poem was so cute! I loved it so much! It made me relate back with my boyfriend. I really enjoy the rhyme scheme because it kept the poem flowing. The poem also kept me wanting to read more in some strange way that I just can't explain. Bravo! I will definetly keep reading more of your works. Keep writing because although they are short the make such an impact in you.
Short, sweet and captivating. This poem really does serve as a main definition of love and romance.
I can't really think of any necessary improvements to be made, it's too awesome to be fixed.
Spot on.
A sweet and delicious poem. Short, original, and flawless. That's the kind of poem I look for, and this one fits that description. I guess the life of this person is really, really, perfect for that person.
This poem is lovely. The title fits perfect,y with it. The only concern I have is that it doesn't use punctuation. That punctuation is needed. Not as much as in a story, but it's needed nonetheless.
By the way, welcome to the site Nudia! Welcome, welcome, welcome! I hope you enjoy your time here and keep on writing!
I love this poem its short and sweet.Though its downfall maybe that its to short.It evoked an emotion in me when i read it and saw the tittle.I think that is what the poet was going for.One last thing Remember punctuation!!. You may choose to emit some from the lines but it is always wise to put them in.Lovely poem anyways!!!! Keep writing.